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September 10th, 2006, 03:47 PM
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Regular Crew
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: South San Francisco, CA
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A couple of my COMMERCIALS!!!
Heres a couple of my commercials. They're short so you don't have to spend hours watching these. Comments please! (Some were shot with my old regular dv camera, so bear with me with my exposure)
Myspace commercial 1 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5vpoU6KTts Myspace commercial 2 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hKC-WNpzDsg Myspace commercial 3 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v6SULypxXoQ inVISIONit Studios commercial 1 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zMf-x4lcjM0 inVISIONit Studios commercial 2 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjjYE-T8o4k |
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September 17th, 2006, 09:38 AM
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New Boot
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Scottsdale, AZ
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I think your writing is succinct and funny. Your timing in regard to how you pace and edit your scenes are okay. But you are right, you GOTTA work on that lighting and controlling the physical aspects and quality of your productions. That said, I watched them all and I REALLY liked the last two a lot.
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September 17th, 2006, 05:35 PM
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New Boot
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Very good and very funny!
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September 17th, 2006, 06:27 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Montreal
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Those were well done. You have a good mind for humour, they actually made me laugh out loud, something I rarely do when watching these types of videos. I agree you need to work on some lighting. But the last video looked great, although that was the only one I didn't understand. Great job.
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