Very well done! I enjoyed it. Expecially the "if you only spoke Canadian" part :)
The only part that I think you can correct was the wide shot just before entering the house where you see a person standing in the background and then the sudden zoom to a close up of the two characters. The accidental person is distracting but not as much as the super zoom.
Fine job, otherwise.
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