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Omar Nabulsi August 19th, 2014 10:26 AM

Portrait of a Horseman
 
Hey all!

I just did a short film and wanted to post it here to get your guys feedback. I am really curious what everyone thinks in terms of camera work, lighting, color, composition, actor performance (Even though the "actor" is just playing himself). Of course if you think it was awesome, that's always nice to hear too

Shot on the Sony PMW-F3, Canon 5D Mark 3, and just a couple shots on the Sony A7r.

Don't forget to like it if you actually liked it :P


Thank you!

Omar

Paul Mailath August 19th, 2014 03:45 PM

Re: Portrait of a Horseman
 
great - really liked it.

at 00:25 there is a distracting sound - it turns out to be a sponge in water (I think) but I don't think that works

The choice of lighting for the interview is interesting - I guess you had to go low because of the hat, I think it works.

Jim Michael August 19th, 2014 04:16 PM

Re: Portrait of a Horseman
 
That was real nice. The audio levels could be adjusted a bit. You can hardly hear his voice over the music at some points, like around 1:18.

Omar Nabulsi August 20th, 2014 05:32 PM

Re: Portrait of a Horseman
 
Thanks for the replies guys! I appreciate the advice and have definitely taken it to heart.

All other feedback welcome.

Thanks again!


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