Portrait of a Horseman at DVinfo.net

Omar Nabulsi · August 19th, 2014, 10:26 AM

Hey all!

I just did a short film and wanted to post it here to get your guys feedback. I am really curious what everyone thinks in terms of camera work, lighting, color, composition, actor performance (Even though the "actor" is just playing himself). Of course if you think it was awesome, that's always nice to hear too

Shot on the Sony PMW-F3, Canon 5D Mark 3, and just a couple shots on the Sony A7r.

Don't forget to like it if you actually liked it :P

Thank you!

Omar

Paul Mailath · August 19th, 2014, 03:45 PM

great - really liked it.

at 00:25 there is a distracting sound - it turns out to be a sponge in water (I think) but I don't think that works

The choice of lighting for the interview is interesting - I guess you had to go low because of the hat, I think it works.

Jim Michael · August 19th, 2014, 04:16 PM

That was real nice. The audio levels could be adjusted a bit. You can hardly hear his voice over the music at some points, like around 1:18.

Omar Nabulsi · August 20th, 2014, 05:32 PM

Thanks for the replies guys! I appreciate the advice and have definitely taken it to heart.

All other feedback welcome.

Thanks again!

August 19th, 2014, 10:26 AM	#1
Omar Nabulsi Regular Crew Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Chicago Posts: 74	Portrait of a Horseman Hey all! I just did a short film and wanted to post it here to get your guys feedback. I am really curious what everyone thinks in terms of camera work, lighting, color, composition, actor performance (Even though the "actor" is just playing himself). Of course if you think it was awesome, that's always nice to hear too Shot on the Sony PMW-F3, Canon 5D Mark 3, and just a couple shots on the Sony A7r. Don't forget to like it if you actually liked it :P Portrait of a Horseman on Vimeo Thank you! Omar

August 19th, 2014, 03:45 PM	#2
Paul Mailath Trustee Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Central Coast - NSW, Australia Posts: 1,606	Re: Portrait of a Horseman great - really liked it. at 00:25 there is a distracting sound - it turns out to be a sponge in water (I think) but I don't think that works The choice of lighting for the interview is interesting - I guess you had to go low because of the hat, I think it works. __________________ Cheers - Paul M. www.perbenyik.com

August 19th, 2014, 04:16 PM	#3
Jim Michael Major Player Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 895	Re: Portrait of a Horseman That was real nice. The audio levels could be adjusted a bit. You can hardly hear his voice over the music at some points, like around 1:18.

August 20th, 2014, 05:32 PM	#4
Omar Nabulsi Regular Crew Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Chicago Posts: 74	Re: Portrait of a Horseman Thanks for the replies guys! I appreciate the advice and have definitely taken it to heart. All other feedback welcome. Thanks again!