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October 23rd, 2009, 05:57 AM
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Hi Chris.
I think you have a strong video, that can be sold as an documentary to a TV channel. Like it very much and can't find much to complain about. VO is fine with relaxing tempo, and I think thats important in any docymentary video. Just one thing, as other have pointed out, I think the opening shot is a bit too long. My suggestion is to listen to what Catherine says about this matter :) Looking forward to the final piece. All the best Geir Inge |
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October 31st, 2009, 07:18 AM
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Chris, I really enjoyed the video. My one comment, and again may be due to compression is the opening shots didn't seem to follow the narration. Other than that I think you atchived your goal of having the "Ken Burns" effect by using and paning through old B&W stills and recent color stills. Waiting for the final product. Bob
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October 31st, 2009, 10:54 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Sacramento, CA
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Bob, Geir and all... thanks for commenting.
I was expecting my achival materials any day when the deadline approached. I added the "front end" as a placeholder and hoped I would have additional photos to add in place of all that prior to submission, but alas, I did not. Thanks for sufferring through a terribly long, mostly "static" front piece. It was not what I had planned. Now that I HAVE my archival stuff... I am feeling practically overwhelmed. I will have something "rough" for final, but know I have a long ways yet to go.. Looking forward to everyone's finals. Chris |
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