UWOL#4 "Hellesoy in sealine" by Vidar Vedaa

Ron Chant · July 30th, 2007, 04:10 AM

Vidiar, I loaded your short from your iweb .Mac site, I like the other short films on there and the artwork.
Video and stills so much better when shown on a black background.
Stunning colour loved all of it, those under water shots brilliant.

I‘ve had some trouble loading some of the videos,

Mat Thompson · July 30th, 2007, 05:22 PM

Hi Vidar

Hey...some great crisp, colourful and interesting shots in this both underwater and topside! It was a great look at the diversity to be found in a shallow shoreline.

The waves soundtrack seemed not to change throughout. I think you should have faded it down with depth or just changed it in some way. I also feel the shots for me didn't build together to form an overall structure. Although as a whole your piece was packaged nicely between the start and ending with the great transition between the 2 worlds.

Great stuff :)
Mat

Ruth Happel · July 31st, 2007, 02:42 PM

The underwater footage was especially spectacular, but I liked the flow of the whole film.

Ruth

Vidar Vedaa · August 2nd, 2007, 03:05 AM

D.J Zupancic,
I have only for testing tryed yore tips,used nature-audio
on the underwater clip.Tanks for your tips.
Link to corekted film:

http://web.mac.com/vidarjohannesveda.../Hellesoy.html
_______________

V.Vedaa.

July 30th, 2007, 04:10 AM	#16
Ron Chant Regular Crew Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: West-London - England Posts: 125	Vidiar, I loaded your short from your iweb .Mac site, I like the other short films on there and the artwork. Video and stills so much better when shown on a black background. Stunning colour loved all of it, those under water shots brilliant. I‘ve had some trouble loading some of the videos,

July 30th, 2007, 05:22 PM	#17
Mat Thompson Trustee Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Kent UK Posts: 1,397	Hi Vidar Hey...some great crisp, colourful and interesting shots in this both underwater and topside! It was a great look at the diversity to be found in a shallow shoreline. The waves soundtrack seemed not to change throughout. I think you should have faded it down with depth or just changed it in some way. I also feel the shots for me didn't build together to form an overall structure. Although as a whole your piece was packaged nicely between the start and ending with the great transition between the 2 worlds. Great stuff :) Mat

July 31st, 2007, 02:42 PM	#18
Ruth Happel Major Player Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Black Mountain, NC Posts: 488	The underwater footage was especially spectacular, but I liked the flow of the whole film. Ruth

August 2nd, 2007, 03:05 AM	#19
Vidar Vedaa Major Player Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: bergen norway Posts: 235	D.J Zupancic, I have only for testing tryed yore tips,used nature-audio on the underwater clip.Tanks for your tips. Link to corekted film: http://web.mac.com/vidarjohannesveda.../Hellesoy.html _______________ V.Vedaa.