My Second Wedding Highlights Clip

Hi guys,

i posted the highlights for the first wedding i filmed on here a few months ago - the main suggestions i got were to break up my cuts a bit more, work on my contrast and colour correction and integrate some audio into the highlights.

Here is the link to my second highlights clip. I still need to work on my colour correction skills but i've tried to take the other suggestions on board!

I'd really appreciate any feedback that you guys have.

James & Lindsay's Wedding Day Highlights on Vimeo

Cheers
Jamie

[Stelios Christofides]

Jamie
I likes it although I would have preferred if you can add more close up shots and also somehow jumping from one scene to the other without a reason (story) behind it makes it a bit...I can't find the right word,confusing perhaps? or destructive maybe?

Stelios

[Carl Wilky]

Originally Posted by Stelios Christofides

Jamie
...I can't find the right word,confusing perhaps? or destructive maybe?

Stelios

Sorry Stelios, i would have to disagree with you, I found the story was quite interesting the way it was layed out. It gave a sense of all the other great things that happened during the day all while the main focus was made on the actual ceremony.

Good job Jamie. Hope to see more of your work.