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long time... · November 10th, 2009, 07:09 PM

is being a long time i don't visit the website or post here.
here is my latest wedding from the past weekend...cc always welcome

thanks

Yunisbel Marrero · November 12th, 2009, 03:53 PM

wow!!!, it is too bad that nobody want's to comment?

Bill Vincent · November 12th, 2009, 05:31 PM

Hi Yunisbel,

Nice work, but you need to recheck your audio on the vows - it is very badly out of sync.

Hope this helps...

Bill

Vince Baker · November 13th, 2009, 07:19 AM

Hi, overall I liked it, built nicely and good choice of music.

A couple of things I did notice, the opening shot allthough very nice showed off some dirt on the lens (I am paranoid about this point, no matter how much you clean it something always seems to show on bright shots) and also at 1:10, your camera tracks pans and zooms across to the photo group shot, I would have cut this a bit later to avoid the panning.

Also, when they walk back down the aisle, it slightly lost focus. Nothing that the couple would notice but I wondered if the cam was on manual or was it the autofocus tracking?

Just a couple of observations, not specifically critising.

Yunisbel Marrero · November 13th, 2009, 09:40 AM

Fixed the audio issue, thanks bill

Vince... I always try to keep my lens clean, but as you said, you will notice that is still dirty when to focus on something bright.

I had the camera on manual focus except for the reception part. I'm still getting use to focus manually while moving around. Getting there.

Thank you again for the comments

Taky Cheung · November 13th, 2009, 10:44 AM

The video is too shaky for my taste.

Tom Hardwick · November 13th, 2009, 11:13 AM

Yes, too shaky for me too. The tracks are supposed to be stick-in-honey smooth and if not would be better as static shots in the opener, same with the pans and pull-focus - they really cry out for a tripod to give your film that 'watch me' call, and especially so if it's a trailer.

You have little zooms left in (the suits walking, into that face), and a person catches your eye left as you zoom into the group. Sorry, but it's all too wobbly and it's not a designed-in wobble, it's more as if you had the OIS turned off.

Don't be disheartened though - you've taken a brave pill to post it here, I realise that.

tom.

Yunisbel Marrero · November 22nd, 2009, 12:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Taky Cheung

The video is too shaky for my taste.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tom Hardwick

Yes, too shaky for me too. The tracks are supposed to be stick-in-honey smooth and if not would be better as static shots in the opener, same with the pans and pull-focus - they really cry out for a tripod to give your film that 'watch me' call, and especially so if it's a trailer.

You have little zooms left in (the suits walking, into that face), and a person catches your eye left as you zoom into the group. Sorry, but it's all too wobbly and it's not a designed-in wobble, it's more as if you had the OIS turned off.

Don't be disheartened though - you've taken a brave pill to post it here, I realise that.

tom.

Is shaky because everything was handheld. I tried my best to keep it steady. I don't have the budget now for stabilization system. And I hate using tripod or monopod.
I made some change on this one now. Here is my setting

Canon XH-A1 30f between 30-90 shutter speed, true color preset
Color grading in Sony Vegas
Slow motion with twixtor (loves this software, make 30f slowmo more clean as you see)

Thanks all for the comments and your time

November 12th, 2009, 03:53 PM	#2
Yunisbel Marrero Regular Crew Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Orlando, Fl Posts: 62	wow!!!, it is too bad that nobody want's to comment? __________________ Please excuse me for any miss-spelling, English is my second language. www.hydreamsproductions.com

November 13th, 2009, 07:19 AM	#4
Vince Baker Regular Crew Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Portsmouth, UK Posts: 118	Hi, overall I liked it, built nicely and good choice of music. A couple of things I did notice, the opening shot allthough very nice showed off some dirt on the lens (I am paranoid about this point, no matter how much you clean it something always seems to show on bright shots) and also at 1:10, your camera tracks pans and zooms across to the photo group shot, I would have cut this a bit later to avoid the panning. Also, when they walk back down the aisle, it slightly lost focus. Nothing that the couple would notice but I wondered if the cam was on manual or was it the autofocus tracking? Just a couple of observations, not specifically critising. __________________ capture it as it happens...with motion and sound. http://www.creative-films.net

November 13th, 2009, 09:40 AM	#5
Yunisbel Marrero Regular Crew Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Orlando, Fl Posts: 62	Fixed the audio issue, thanks bill Vince... I always try to keep my lens clean, but as you said, you will notice that is still dirty when to focus on something bright. I had the camera on manual focus except for the reception part. I'm still getting use to focus manually while moving around. Getting there. Thank you again for the comments __________________ Please excuse me for any miss-spelling, English is my second language. www.hydreamsproductions.com

November 13th, 2009, 10:44 AM	#6
Taky Cheung Inner Circle Join Date: May 2007 Location: Los Angeles, USA Posts: 2,114	The video is too shaky for my taste. __________________ LA Color Pros Blog RODE Authorized Reseller . Comer LED Camera Lights . TakyBox HTML5 Menu Generator

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November 12th, 2009, 05:31 PM	#3
Bill Vincent Major Player Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Nashville, TN Posts: 253	Hi Yunisbel, Nice work, but you need to recheck your audio on the vows - it is very badly out of sync. Hope this helps... Bill

November 13th, 2009, 11:13 AM	#7
Tom Hardwick Inner Circle Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Billericay, England UK Posts: 4,711	Yes, too shaky for me too. The tracks are supposed to be stick-in-honey smooth and if not would be better as static shots in the opener, same with the pans and pull-focus - they really cry out for a tripod to give your film that 'watch me' call, and especially so if it's a trailer. You have little zooms left in (the suits walking, into that face), and a person catches your eye left as you zoom into the group. Sorry, but it's all too wobbly and it's not a designed-in wobble, it's more as if you had the OIS turned off. Don't be disheartened though - you've taken a brave pill to post it here, I realise that. tom.