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Highlights with a Narrative · December 10th, 2009, 03:03 AM

We've been putting more of a focus on narrative of late, seems like we were late to this "trend of 2009" so we're making up for lost time. The song, the sermon and the speech work together to create a story to tie this one together. But it's far from perfect, and I'd love to hear some critique and suggestions on how to push this further. Or any little details that didn't work for you while watching the video.

Thanks!

Ken Diewert · December 10th, 2009, 11:23 AM

I don't know Erik, maybe if I watched it as many times as you, I might find something to improve... but it looks pretty damn good to me. You guys are doing some beautiful work over there.

Dimitris Mantalias · December 10th, 2009, 02:32 PM

Well, Erik... That was very touching, especially the bride speech part. Other than that, your shots and editing prove that you put great care into creating this film. Thanks for sharing, because I really enjoyed it.

Also, the music selection was right on the spot!

Travis Cossel · December 10th, 2009, 03:57 PM

Erik, that was outstanding. You had me from the moment the priest was talking about the color of the flowers and you showed the flowers. Excellent work, and I have nothing of note to mention in terms of critique. A real heartfelt piece. Bravo.

Prashanna Jayaseelan · December 10th, 2009, 05:09 PM

Erik
That was beautifully constructed... the priest's audio, the song choice, the shot choice to go with the what the priest was saying... you put emotions into this piece which I believe is key to any work.

Matt Barwick · December 10th, 2009, 06:55 PM

Beautiful work Erik and in my opinion that was a rock solid piece. The VO choices were perfect.

Cheers,

MB

Erik Andersen · December 10th, 2009, 11:43 PM

Ken, Dimitris, Travis, Prashanna and Matt, thank you so much for your comments!

Matthew Craggs · December 11th, 2009, 08:21 AM

Like the others, I have nothing but great things to say. I tried very hard to find something to critique and found nothing. Great work.

December 10th, 2009, 11:23 AM	#2
Ken Diewert Trustee Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Vancouver Island, Canada Posts: 1,200	I don't know Erik, maybe if I watched it as many times as you, I might find something to improve... but it looks pretty damn good to me. You guys are doing some beautiful work over there. __________________ C100, 5DMk2, FCPX

December 10th, 2009, 02:32 PM	#3
Dimitris Mantalias Major Player Join Date: May 2009 Location: Arta, Greece Posts: 342	Well, Erik... That was very touching, especially the bride speech part. Other than that, your shots and editing prove that you put great care into creating this film. Thanks for sharing, because I really enjoyed it. Also, the music selection was right on the spot! __________________ "A successful wedding videographer is the one that offers for viewing some excellent videos and some boring videos, and gets positive reviews for both".

December 10th, 2009, 03:57 PM	#4
Travis Cossel Inner Circle Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Miami, FL Posts: 2,933	Erik, that was outstanding. You had me from the moment the priest was talking about the color of the flowers and you showed the flowers. Excellent work, and I have nothing of note to mention in terms of critique. A real heartfelt piece. Bravo. __________________ Black Label Films www.blacklabelweddingfilms.com

December 10th, 2009, 05:09 PM	#5
Prashanna Jayaseelan Regular Crew Join Date: May 2007 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 100	Erik That was beautifully constructed... the priest's audio, the song choice, the shot choice to go with the what the priest was saying... you put emotions into this piece which I believe is key to any work. __________________ Prashanna http://p-yourvision.com

December 10th, 2009, 06:55 PM	#6
Matt Barwick Regular Crew Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Kingscliff, Australia Posts: 196	Beautiful work Erik and in my opinion that was a rock solid piece. The VO choices were perfect. Cheers, MB __________________ www.mattbarwickfilms.com / wedding videos gold coast / my stuff on Vimeo

December 10th, 2009, 11:43 PM	#7
Erik Andersen Major Player Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Vancouver Canada Posts: 218	Ken, Dimitris, Travis, Prashanna and Matt, thank you so much for your comments! __________________ Canon 5D Mark II \|\| L-Series Lenses \|\| Steadicam Pilot \|\| Final Cut Studio www.lovestorymedia.com

December 11th, 2009, 08:21 AM	#8
Matthew Craggs Major Player Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Welland, Ontario Posts: 311	Like the others, I have nothing but great things to say. I tried very hard to find something to critique and found nothing. Great work.

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