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Kawai Sin November 19th, 2005 07:21 PM

Show Your Work 2006
 
"The Portait" All shot with ZR40 - Horror

Hi all,

I just wanted to post up my latest work which I shot with a Canon ZR40. The only other things we used were some florescent lights and foam boards. Everything is else we improvised, trying to work with a shoe string budget. I found a composer from Craigslist who also did the voice over.

22mb Streaming .MOV
http://www.rollingedit.com/final_episode.htm

Comments are welcome, let me know what you think. Thanks.

Josh Herrlich November 20th, 2005 07:26 AM

New Music Video
 
Hey guys,

this is my first post here, so before posting the vid I made last week, i would like to tell you something about me. My name is Josh, I am from Duesseldorf, Germany, I am 17 and I love the whole process of making movies like the most of you guys I think.

For a schoolband I had to make a music video the last three days, including cutting from 0000 to 0900 last night. I hope that was it worth. We had no budget, no big plan, the guys did never stand in front of a camera before. It was really guerilla filmmaking. So here is the flick, I would really like to get some replies. Whatever good or bad.

http://www.tushilden-basketball.de/Blick_ins_licht.mov

P.S. please do not criticise the music, criticise the pictures!

Josh Herrlich November 22nd, 2005 10:37 AM

I can't edit my post, can I? So here is the new link: http://reflect-artworks.de.vu//proje...icht_video.php

I would be very happy if someone would reply!

Steve Law November 22nd, 2005 12:11 PM

well done!
i like it. so tell us, what equipment did you use?

Eric Elliott November 22nd, 2005 03:00 PM

Ausgezeichnet! Good composition and nice cutting. The only suggestion I have would be to get the camera moving more. Some of the shots are a bit too static for the high-energy feel of the band. But, overall, it's a good piece of work. Congratulations!

Josh Herrlich November 22nd, 2005 03:45 PM

thanks for the replies, guys. Yeah, it's a bit static, but I was afraid of getting too unsteady shots... Maybe I should have tried it more often to get a good moving shot. Next time ;)

I shot it with a XL1... No S or anything. Most of the time I used the 3x Wideangle lense... Or the normal 16x. I shot in the 16:9 modus.

Andy Peterson November 23rd, 2005 10:08 AM

Cheated
 
Hey guys,

Here is trailor to a short film we just finished.
Give it a couple minutes to download completely before playing.

Shot on an FX1.

http://www.pjrules.com/matt/cheated%20trailer1.avi

Let me know what you think!

-Andy

Graham Clark November 24th, 2005 12:00 AM

Well done. That is a lot of work for 3 days. I like a lot of the camera work, more the outdoor stuff. I'd suggest not repeating elements, it looks like you ran out of choices, which may be the case. Also, if possible in the future try using 2 cameras. One close, one wide, or one still and the other moving, or what ever. It gives you way more choices of clips for the same amount of time shooting.

Keep up the good work.

Wayne Kinney November 25th, 2005 08:50 AM

Just some of my 3D animations for everyone to laugh at
 
Hello,
Was just browsing through some of my old university work (i did a Computer Animation course) and thought i would post 3 of them for the fun of it.

Final Project done in Softimage XSI:
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/wayne.k...nalproject.htm

Character Animation module done in Softimage XSI:
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/wayne.k...ranimation.htm

And some early work from my first year done in 3DS MAX:
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/wayne.k...themilkman.htm

Enjoy

Ash Greyson November 26th, 2005 12:40 AM

Your framing of the story parts is excellent. Nice shots, telling the story in the cut with a good eye for what is naturally cinematic. The band performance stuff is not dynamic enough, more moves, more angles, WAY more tight shots. That is the easy stuff and you can learn it with practice, the thing that you cant "learn" is a natural ability to see the shot and that you seem to have...



ash =o)

Ash Greyson November 26th, 2005 12:56 AM

If you are going to have a slow moving trailer with no talking, voice over, etc. you better have some big dynamic cinematic shots packed with emotion. Dont think you got there. Showing people's lips moving without hearing what they are saying is almost always a mistake, in film school they called it "lip flap."

If I am being brutal, there was not much that worked with this trailer. If you are going to go with a score like that, the visuals much match oe else your production value sticks out like a sore thumb. Try going with another piece of music and splicing in some good performances of the actors, the words alone are not enough, maybe try some slow motion.

A trailer does not always have to clearly identify the story but it ALWAYS has to make you want to watch the movie. For indie film makers it is a real struggle because you dont have access to big name actors, a huge crew, etc. but you still have to find something compelling and the trailer as it stands now doesnt have anything that would compel people to want to see the film...



ash =o)

Mathieu Ghekiere November 26th, 2005 06:53 AM

I thought the trailer wasn't that bad.
I didn't mind not hearing what they said, I rather had the feeling of: now I know they will argue, and if I see the movie I'll know what about.

Andy Peterson November 26th, 2005 03:24 PM

Hey Ash,

Thanks for the post.
We are a bunch of TV Broadcasting students with no proper 'film' training. This was a fun project to work on.

This isn't a simple relationship movie. There is a HUGE twist that we tried to hint at in the trailer to intice people to watch. Did that not come through?

I have passed your recomendations along to the editor.

Thanks!

...Andy

Paul R Johnson November 26th, 2005 03:43 PM

Most contemporary trailers feature the best bits of the product. Most are fast and pacey - the slower, gentler style works if there are things to look at apart from the obvious. As an example the girl on the phone, upset. Why not take a much smaller chunk and slo-mo it showing the facial expression of sadness. One question - why black and white? It has the 'look' of tv, not film, in shooting and framing - so the b&w is an oddity. The other thing in a short trailer like this is that far too much time is spent on black & titles - waste of time, in my view.

The test I always use is "do I want to watch this?" and I'm sorry to say the answer, for me, would be no.

Leigh Wanstead November 26th, 2005 08:53 PM

My garden show
 
http://www.salenz.com/movie/www.sale...2005.11.27.mpg

Can be played by software dvd player i.e. powerdvd, Microsoft Media player etc.

File size around 80mb.

Regards
Leigh

Graham Clark November 26th, 2005 09:26 PM

I tried to veiw your video, but just got the Q?. What codec did you use?

Leigh Wanstead November 26th, 2005 09:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Graham Clark
I tried to veiw your video, but just got the Q?. What codec did you use?

It is mainconcept mpeg2 decoder.

Regards
Leigh

Ash Greyson November 27th, 2005 02:09 AM

No real implication of a twist... try a drastic music change with a reaction shot or some sound design (forboding sounds with a stark dark finish).


ash =o)

Justine Haupt November 27th, 2005 12:53 PM

I can't view any of the files in quicktime or winamp.

Jeffery Patch November 27th, 2005 05:24 PM

New technology themed internet show
 
Hi there friendly dvinfo members. I recently shot a test/pilot episode for a technology themed internet show I am working on. Unfortunately I had to host by myself, but next time a good friend of mine is going to co-host and I hope that it gives it a much more casual feel.

Take a look. It's kind of a rough cut. I'm planning on sweetening the audio up tonight. There is a some nose from the laptop's fan in one of the segments but I think I can get rid of it with Soundtrack Pro. We'll see!

It's in mpeg4 and you can download it here:

http://www.techedgetv.com/?postid=2

Mike Sun November 27th, 2005 08:51 PM

My first bike stunt show feature video
 
This is my first time filming a bike stunt show, for one of my friends, on my own with no time for second retakes.

Please provide me with some feedback on what you think as I'd like to improve on my future videos. I know I blew out some of the scenes and the color is a bit too saturated, I think. Excuse the profanity from the music used; I had a tough time choosing a song first of all.

My only complaint is when I encoded it to *.wmv the video looks significantly darker than the uncompressed avi file. My settings was 2-pass VBR; Avg Bitrate was 1900 and Max bitrate was 3000. How do you guys get such a good quality when you encode it to *.wmv? What are your settings?

I used a Panasonic DVC30 shot in the Cinema Gamma scene setting.

Any comments will be appreciated, thanks.

http://s51.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0...A3BE3SOH7EOG9A
50Megs

Ash Greyson November 27th, 2005 09:29 PM

The look is totally fine. The editing and music need to be more dynamic, all dissolves just gets a little boring. Generally a dissolve is to show time lapse or for emotional impact. You have lots of great wide shots, try mixing in some tight shots as well, mainly to help with editing as you will want to be wide to show the tricks. Not bad for a first effort....



ash =o)

Jeffery Patch November 28th, 2005 02:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ash Greyson
The look is totally fine. The editing and music need to be more dynamic, all dissolves just gets a little boring. Generally a dissolve is to show time lapse or for emotional impact. You have lots of great wide shots, try mixing in some tight shots as well, mainly to help with editing as you will want to be wide to show the tricks. Not bad for a first effort....



ash =o)

I gave it a look. Pretty cool. I don't mind the dissolves so much, but maybe a few quicker cuts could liven it up a bit.

Justine Haupt November 28th, 2005 06:01 PM

I just got them to work on my other pc... nice work! -- for a single person, the animation is certainly nothing to laugh at.

Jack Zhang November 28th, 2005 08:03 PM

Very nice, I'm currently trying to find a course where they teach Maya animation right now, and since I'm still in Grade 10, I need to find somewhere to train me for that kind of stuff after school. (and it must be in vancouver) I need suggestions. Art Institute of Vancouver? BCIT?

Sheridan Cleland November 29th, 2005 10:25 AM

Newbie submitting work to the masses.
 
Got my xl2 about 4 months ago. This video was only the 3rd thing I filmed with it so I'm still getting accustomed to the camera and all of the magical things it can do.

Check this out and give me your thoughts.

Quicktime
http://www.nohands-studios.net/video...20a%20Fool.mov

Windows
http://www.nohands-studios.net/video...20a%20Fool.wmv

Mathieu Ghekiere November 29th, 2005 12:16 PM

Sheridan, I have not viewed your work (downloading now) but the best board to post this is our DV for the MAsses board, that's where everyone posts his work:

http://www.dvinfo.net/conf/forumdisplay.php?f=39

Good luck!

Pete Bauer November 29th, 2005 12:22 PM

Yup, moved to DV for the Masses where you'll get more viewers.

Wayne Kinney November 29th, 2005 02:25 PM

Thanks for your comments guys.

This was 2 years ago. Dont really do the animation much anymore.

Im from the UK so couldn't suggest a good institute, sorry

Eric Brown November 30th, 2005 01:43 AM

XL2 grabs from a sci-fi I'm shooting
 
Hey, everyone. Here's a link to some grabs from a sci-fi I'm currently shooting. These are pulls from raw video with no cc. Any and all comments are welcome. Apologies, though for the low rez of the pics. Just cruddy grabs.

http://www.indiefilmer.com/nuke/modu...iewtopic&t=100

Matt Brabender November 30th, 2005 01:58 AM

nice colouring and lighting :)

Richard Alvarez November 30th, 2005 08:10 AM

Great use of the glue gun!

Dylan Couper November 30th, 2005 11:08 AM

Looks good man!
Is that big ass gun looking thing made out of PVC fittings? If so, excellent work.
Do we get to see a trailer? :)

Dylan Couper November 30th, 2005 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Richard Alvarez
Great use of the glue gun!

Doh! I didn't even recognize it! I was looking at it wondering how much that sucker cost to buy. :)

Eric Brown November 30th, 2005 05:34 PM

Yep, PVC fittings and pretty much anything else I could get my hands on. In the scene it flashes by fairly quickly so the uneducated won't catch what's going on. There's also a 1988 RCA VHS camcorder that gave it's life to be part of the rail gun.
And yeah, at first I didn't know what Richard was talking about. Glue gun? But you must be talking about the injection gun at the guy's neck. That's pretty funny because I hadn't noticed how much it looked like one.
Actually it started life as some kind of a metal casing used for a real laser device. I added the whole front end piece and the metal cylinder on the bottom.
I'll try and post some footage as soon as possible.
Thanks for the comments!

Giuseppe Palumbo November 30th, 2005 11:20 PM

My First Hip-Hop Video
 
Just finished my first hip-hop video for a client. Tell me what you think.


http://csxinfo.net/palumbo/TUN%20-%20Cleveland.mov

Bill Porter December 1st, 2005 05:45 AM

If the other video you posted, of your friends' band, was your first video, then this is your second... ?

It's much nicer than your other one, which wasn't bad, especially considering you had a zero budget. At age 18 with clearly a low budget on this one too, I have to say it's out-frickin-standing. I am sure whatever you do next will be even better.

Keep it up! We want to see VMA's by the time you are 23! :-)

Giuseppe Palumbo December 1st, 2005 03:26 PM

thanks alot man! yep, this is my second music video. glad u remembered. haha. But yea, basically no budget but everything turned out pretty good. i should be getting my adapter and DVX in a month or so. so more stuff surely will be coming. im already working on the next video which is actually for R. Kelly's old keyboard player. so alot of people will be seeing this one for sure. Whats everyone else think and is there anything im doing that i should steer away from that you notice?

Jim Montgomery December 2nd, 2005 06:38 PM

First video in the marketplace
 
I have not yet activated this as yet, would like your alls honest opinions. From this page, with the available information and trailer would you buy this video?

Thanks for the input

Jim Montgomery

http://www.customflix.com/Store/Show...isPreview=true

Mike Teutsch December 2nd, 2005 06:52 PM

Looking good!
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Jim Montgomery
I have not yet activated this as yet, would like your alls honest opinions. From this page, with the available information and trailer would you buy this video?

Thanks for the input

Jim Montgomery

http://www.customflix.com/Store/Show...isPreview=true

Jim,

Your footage is always spectacular, and I am always impressed with it and your mastery of AE and or other programs. I don’t know your audience though, DVD sales or for the Outdoor channel or what? With this trailer, I would include a kill shot and make it slightly longer.

Best of luck!

Mike


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