Show Your Work 2006

Rafael Lopes · January 17th, 2006, 11:27 AM

Does this one work?

http://www.stickypod.com/stickypod_u...Unfinished.avi

Philip Gioja · January 17th, 2006, 08:07 PM

My wife and I wrote this short spoken word piece -- feel free to check it out at http://www.centerstreetproductions.c...ingcolor.shtml .

It's all still photographs edited in photoshop and then dumped into Final Cut Pro and given motion vectors there.

Thanks for looking! Let me know what you think.

Philip Gioja · January 17th, 2006, 08:16 PM

if you can't get that to work, I posted it on google video too:

http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...74443032987157

Tony Gilmore · January 17th, 2006, 10:55 PM

Hello all,

Here is a doc Ie been working on. This is a few scenes in the first 30 minutes. Id like to hear any opinions on the story and flow and any other criticisms you may have.

http://www.streamload.com/behindforg..._Sequences.mov

thanks!

Jeremy Hughes · January 18th, 2006, 11:37 AM

It got tough for me to read the captions at the bottom. Are you planning on turning that into a VO?

Tony Gilmore · January 18th, 2006, 06:46 PM

yeah, the subtitles are small and havent been edited, also the yellow will be VO.

Tony Gilmore · January 19th, 2006, 07:37 AM

Lots of hits on this but people arent saying much...is it that bad?

Jeremy Hughes · January 19th, 2006, 10:44 AM

I dont think its a bad thing. Its a long video that not a lot of people are going to have time to watch. I watched the first 10 minutes and then paged through the rest. I dont know where this will be showing, if its a PBS kind of showing, the pacing isnt too bad. If its got a different type of dist channel, I'd definately think about picking up the pacing. Also, there wasnt a ton that grabbed me in the beginning and made me want to really find out what was going on. Maybe look to nail your sinker quicker to get me hooked. I'd also maybe pick up the pacing slightly regardless in some areas just to continue to keep the viewer on their toes. Take all that with a grain of salt of course. I was trying to watch this on the job so I dont exactly have a ton of time ;)

Walker Robins · January 19th, 2006, 02:27 PM

Teaser for documentary short shot on FX1:

http://www.walkrobins.com/files/datinghabitstrailer.mov

Jeremy Hughes · January 19th, 2006, 03:47 PM

How long until thats done... definately interested in seeing that. How are you shooting? As is do you have a lot of action mixed in with the interviews? That could be a really funny one, maybe you should pitch that to MTV, I could see something like that at least having a conceptual chance on M2 - HA

Walker Robins · January 19th, 2006, 05:34 PM

I just finished it, actually. It's 12 minutes long, all interview footage. We were at a crossroads of whether to mix action with the interviews and make it a much longer piece with a narrative or stay short at a (hopefully) engaging length. We decided what we wanted to say could come across on a short length and remain engaging despite the prospect of 12 minutes of interviews. I'll be putting the whole thing up probably here in the next day or two.

Also, if you follow college football, several of the guys are freshmen on OU's football team that I'm sure you'll be hearing about over the next few years. They're awesome guys.

Bigo Hoggins · January 20th, 2006, 03:01 AM

I like it . the music went really well with the scenes.

Rafael Lopes · January 20th, 2006, 07:25 AM

Hi Guys,

This is a narrative music video a did some time ago that won a couple of film festivals in Spain and Portugal.

http://eventos01.wanadoo.es/Low%20Radiation.wmv

Note: it is very very very very compressed for the net

Jeremy Hughes · January 20th, 2006, 02:59 PM

That was fun stuff... ha! What did you shoot on?

James Darren · January 20th, 2006, 10:00 PM

G'day Ryan,

Overall nice job mate, enjoyed watching it...

I've also thought about putting a wireless mic on our football players here in Oz but since our guys wear no padding, it would almost be guaranteed the mic would get damaged in tackles... www.afl.com.au

I reckon using 2 cameras would make this even better, having one constantly following the player with wireless mic, even when hes on the sidelines to get his reactions, cheers, etc & one camera following the game/ball....

January 17th, 2006, 08:07 PM	#32
Philip Gioja Major Player Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Piper City, IL Posts: 350	blinding Color (3 min short) My wife and I wrote this short spoken word piece -- feel free to check it out at http://www.centerstreetproductions.c...ingcolor.shtml . It's all still photographs edited in photoshop and then dumped into Final Cut Pro and given motion vectors there. Thanks for looking! Let me know what you think.

January 17th, 2006, 10:55 PM	#34
Tony Gilmore New Boot Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: South Korea Posts: 16	Need some criticism on these scenes Hello all, Here is a doc Ie been working on. This is a few scenes in the first 30 minutes. Id like to hear any opinions on the story and flow and any other criticisms you may have. http://www.streamload.com/behindforg..._Sequences.mov thanks!

January 19th, 2006, 07:37 AM	#37
Tony Gilmore New Boot Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: South Korea Posts: 16	No response Lots of hits on this but people arent saying much...is it that bad?

January 19th, 2006, 02:27 PM	#39
Walker Robins New Boot Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Edmond, OK Posts: 10	Short Trailer Teaser for documentary short shot on FX1: http://www.walkrobins.com/files/datinghabitstrailer.mov

January 20th, 2006, 07:25 AM	#43
Rafael Lopes Trustee Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Rio de Janeiro Posts: 1,239	award winning video Hi Guys, This is a narrative music video a did some time ago that won a couple of film festivals in Spain and Portugal. http://eventos01.wanadoo.es/Low%20Radiation.wmv Note: it is very very very very compressed for the net

January 17th, 2006, 11:27 AM	#31
Rafael Lopes Trustee Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Rio de Janeiro Posts: 1,239	Does this one work? http://www.stickypod.com/stickypod_u...Unfinished.avi

January 17th, 2006, 08:16 PM	#33
Philip Gioja Major Player Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Piper City, IL Posts: 350	if you can't get that to work, I posted it on google video too: http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...74443032987157

January 18th, 2006, 11:37 AM	#35
Jeremy Hughes Major Player Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Columbus, Ohio Posts: 276 Images: 2	It got tough for me to read the captions at the bottom. Are you planning on turning that into a VO?

January 18th, 2006, 06:46 PM	#36
Tony Gilmore New Boot Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: South Korea Posts: 16	yeah, the subtitles are small and havent been edited, also the yellow will be VO.

January 19th, 2006, 10:44 AM	#38
Jeremy Hughes Major Player Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Columbus, Ohio Posts: 276 Images: 2	I dont think its a bad thing. Its a long video that not a lot of people are going to have time to watch. I watched the first 10 minutes and then paged through the rest. I dont know where this will be showing, if its a PBS kind of showing, the pacing isnt too bad. If its got a different type of dist channel, I'd definately think about picking up the pacing. Also, there wasnt a ton that grabbed me in the beginning and made me want to really find out what was going on. Maybe look to nail your sinker quicker to get me hooked. I'd also maybe pick up the pacing slightly regardless in some areas just to continue to keep the viewer on their toes. Take all that with a grain of salt of course. I was trying to watch this on the job so I dont exactly have a ton of time ;)

January 19th, 2006, 03:47 PM	#40
Jeremy Hughes Major Player Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Columbus, Ohio Posts: 276 Images: 2	How long until thats done... definately interested in seeing that. How are you shooting? As is do you have a lot of action mixed in with the interviews? That could be a really funny one, maybe you should pitch that to MTV, I could see something like that at least having a conceptual chance on M2 - HA

January 19th, 2006, 05:34 PM	#41
Walker Robins New Boot Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Edmond, OK Posts: 10	I just finished it, actually. It's 12 minutes long, all interview footage. We were at a crossroads of whether to mix action with the interviews and make it a much longer piece with a narrative or stay short at a (hopefully) engaging length. We decided what we wanted to say could come across on a short length and remain engaging despite the prospect of 12 minutes of interviews. I'll be putting the whole thing up probably here in the next day or two. Also, if you follow college football, several of the guys are freshmen on OU's football team that I'm sure you'll be hearing about over the next few years. They're awesome guys.

January 20th, 2006, 03:01 AM	#42
Bigo Hoggins Regular Crew Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 62	I like it . the music went really well with the scenes.

January 20th, 2006, 02:59 PM	#44
Jeremy Hughes Major Player Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Columbus, Ohio Posts: 276 Images: 2	That was fun stuff... ha! What did you shoot on?

January 20th, 2006, 10:00 PM	#45
James Darren Major Player Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: New York, NY Posts: 235	G'day Ryan, Overall nice job mate, enjoyed watching it... I've also thought about putting a wireless mic on our football players here in Oz but since our guys wear no padding, it would almost be guaranteed the mic would get damaged in tackles... www.afl.com.au I reckon using 2 cameras would make this even better, having one constantly following the player with wireless mic, even when hes on the sidelines to get his reactions, cheers, etc & one camera following the game/ball....